Showing posts with label lack of basic knowledge. Show all posts
Showing posts with label lack of basic knowledge. Show all posts

Sunday, February 10, 2013

Avs Mailbag

Hello! Today we take a look at an Avs Mailbag from last week.

Too early to press panic button?

In this installment of the Mailbag, Adrian Dater tackles five questions from readers. The first question asks whether, in light of the poor power play, PK, and road performances by the Avs so far, an early first-round draft pick is all that Avs fans have to look forward to this season. Dater answers by saying that the presumed #1 pick is Seth Jones (son of one-time Denver Nugget Popeye Jones... cool little trivia tidbit there) it's probably too early to start thinking about draft picks, but that "in a short season, the panic button will get pushed a lot earlier than usual."

I suppose this is a good enough answer, but it's worth nothing that at the time AD wrote this, the Avs were 2-4. Three games earlier, they had been 2-1, and two games later they would be 4-4. I would have liked to have seen an answer that a bit more emphatically points out the mercurial nature of the start of any season, particularly one that started as unusually as this NHL season has, before even humoring the "panic button" sort of reader.
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Tuesday, January 29, 2013

No Suspension for Brad Stuart

Hello! Today we will be taking a look at a recent All Things Avs blog by Adrian Dater. This blog deals with the lack of disciplinary action taken by the league over the hit by San Jose's Brad Stuart that knocked Avs captain Gabe Landeskog briefly out of that game, and caused him to miss the following game in Edmonton. Not only will we take a look at the blog entry, but we will have a little discussion about NHL rules and the Laws of Physics, to boot!

No Suspension for Brad Stuart

There is very little to this blog. Short and sweet, it's basically a quick update on the situation in which Dater informs his reader that the league has elected to take no action against Stuart for the hit, which also received no in-game penalty. My take (which will be evident by the time you finish reading the blog) is that while an in-game minor wouldn't have been out of order (Stuart's elbow made contact, but it wasn't extended, it was in the follow-through... so in my view that aspect is borderline), this was a fairly clean hit. The reason Landeskog got hurt was not a dirty play by Stuart, but because Landy skated head-first into a monster open-ice hit, the sort we Avs fans would love to see somebody in maroon -- say, Erik Johnson, for example -- dishing out to people.

Brad Stuart explains to reporters about how his strict diet
of infants and kittens has helped prolong his NHL career.
Things like this are when the All Things Avs blog is at its best: delivering little bits of information that are either too small or too trivial to create an entire column for them. So in theory, this is a good blog entry. Dater writes that he's not surprised there was no suspension because "Landeskog emerged OK." Fair enough, I guess... although I think it's more because it was a legal hit AND Landeskog emerged OK (or so we thought). It goes off the tracks, however, when Dater chooses to add in this sentence.

The head was the initial point of contact and Stuart left his feet delivering the hit – which Todd McLellan and the laughably homer-ish Sharks TV announcers said didn’t happen (might want to get your eyes examined boys, cuz he clearly left his feet)

To discuss the problems with this sentence and this blog, we can first look at the video of the hit. Landeskog approaches the collision with his body held much lower than Stuart's, there isn't enough height difference to cause this so it's either invisible stilts for Stewart, or Landy is crouching, having reached out a bit for the puck. It appears (although this is difficult to discern with 100% certainty) that Landeskog's head and shoulder are actually the initial point of contact with Stuart's shoulder, immediately followed by pretty much every part of Landeskog's body north of his shins (as opposed to the last time Landeskog got clobbered at the blueline, in which Andy Sutton hit almost nothing but his head).

Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Year in Review: Jan Hejda

Here are some quick thoughts on Mike Chambers's recent review of Avalanche defenseman Jan Hejda's 2011-2012 season.

Avs year-in-review spotlight: Jan Hejda

Chambers does a passable job recapping Hejda's season, which I would describe as solid if not spectacular. Chambers mentions that Hejda played a lot of minutes against the opponent's top line, but concludes that he will need to be more of an impact player next season to be worth his contract. Fair enough, I don't really disagree.

I find some of Chambers's conclusions confusing, however. For example, he notes that Hejda was 4th on the team in hits (he was actually 3rd, as McGinn was with SJ the majority of the season) and 2nd in blocked shots, but then writes that these "numbers are disappointing." I suppose anything less than leading the team in both would be disappointing to Chambers?

Thursday, October 6, 2011

Local Reporter Surprised, Upset over Extremely Commonplace and Reasonable Event.

The Avalanche season opener is fast approaching, and the team has finalized its roster. This has led Adrian Dater to climb up onto his stump and declare that the Avalanche have made a "very...very, very bad decision" in sending Stefan Elliott to Lake Erie:

Stefan Elliott to the minors? Bad decision

In this All Things Avs blog post, Dater makes it abundantly clear that he thinks Stefan Elliott should have made the Avs' NHL roster and that the Avalanche front office is a bunch of nincompoops. He makes it equally clear that he would much rather sit around and gripe about the Avalanche with his fellow fans than to report on it like a... well, a reporter.

Elliott, pictured moments after the Avalanche began the plot to destroy his life.
Having predicted that Elliott would make the Avs roster ("take it to the bank"), Dater reacts with surprise here that he didn't, and takes his embarrassment out on the Avs mangement. Dater got caught in the same trap when he predicted that Vokoun would be the Avs next goalie... he makes a prediction, ends up being wrong about it, and then reacts (and reports) emotionally rather than objectively. An objective view of this situation reveals many very good reasons for Elliott to start the year in the AHL.

Dater took the same approach a couple days ago with the decision to send Tyson Barrie to the AHL... and just as he was then, he's just wrong, plain and simple. As good as these guys may have been, it's pretty clear they aren't going to break into the Avs' top four without an injury or two occurring, so why bury a talented young kid at the bottom of the NHL roster, rather than send him to the minors where he will get gobs of ice time playing against men instead of boys, and–just maybe–learn a thing or two?

Monday, October 3, 2011

Various Preseason Stuff - Hockey Coming Soon!!!

The Avs' preseason schedule is complete, and the Red Wings (and the rest of the NHL) await. Few things are as useless and tell the fan as little as a pro sport's preseason schedule, so I must admit haven't been paying a lot of attention to either the Avs or the coverage they receive... but here are a couple tidbits to carry us through to the start of the regular season, just a few short days away!

Kings rip Avs, new goalie Varlamov, 6-0 in preseason

Quick glove but slow feet, poor lateral movement.
In this recap of an Avs loss to the LA Kings, Dater goes out of his way to rehash the deal that brought Varlamov to the team before bothering to write that neither Varlamov or the Avs played very well in what he admits is a "meaningless" game. Pointing out that Varlamov didn't play well is fine, and there's no problem recalling the fact that the Avs gave up a couple high draft picks to get him. However, Dater has a history of placing way too much blame on the goalies he doesn't like, while turning a blind eye when "his guys" don't play well, and I hope this isn't an early sign that he's gearing up for that again.

Dater made no secret this offseason that he thought the Avs should get Vokoun, but instead they traded for Varlamov... and so while there's nothing in particular wrong with this article, the fact that AD took so much time talking about the goalie situation makes me worry that he's just priming the pump for a year's worth of throwing Varlamov under the bus. If the Avs are struggling after a few weeks and Dater is repeatedly pointing out how well Anderson and/or Vokoun is doing, we will have our answer.
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Saturday, March 19, 2011

All Things Avs blog: "Negative" right in the title, so at least we know what we're in for.

http://blogs.denverpost.com/avs/2011/03/18/x-rays-on-johnson-negative-as-is-everything-else-with-avalanche/6695/

In this blog entry, Dater starts off with an update on Eric Johnson: X-rays are negative, likely to play Saturday.

The rest of the blog is scattershot bitching about the Avalanche. Typical Dater stuff, with no insight and no focus: the Avs aren't competing, guys look like they've quit (but not Anderson, of course!), they're going through the motions, they're playing for their jobs, yadda yadda yadda.

A couple years ago, there were ads for the NHL network featuring a coach who did nothing but spout cliches... that's Dater. If this blog was just some fan out there complaining that his or her beloved Avalanche are stinking up the joint on a nightly basis, then OK. But the Avalanche have one major media entity covering them, and this is what we get from it.

Dater closes with this:

By the way, here is how former NHL GM Craig Button, now a TV analyst, sizes up the top five prospects in the coming NHL draft. You might be surprised to see that neither Larsson nor Landeskog is his top pick.

A couple days ago, Dater made it sound as if these two were the only two guys worth considering in the draft. So yeah, if the only thing I used to learn about the NHL was The Denver Post's crappy blog, maybe I'd be surprised to see that Ryan Nugent-Hopkins is ranked #1 by a lot of sources. But since I apparently spend more time reading and learning about the NHL than the Post's hockey beat writer, I am not surprised at all.

Should the guy who's job it is to cover the NHL and report it to his readers really be surprised at something that is common knowledge just about everywhere else (relatively speaking)? The fact that Dater is surprised is kind of the point behind this blog... Avs fans deserve better than this.
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Friday, March 11, 2011

All Things Avs blog: Dater's hypocrisy sensor goes off; unclear if he's using it correctly.

http://blogs.denverpost.com/avs/2011/03/10/air-canada-threatens-to-pull-nhl-sponsorship-over-player-safety-concerns-seven-years-after-sponsoring-games-in-which-todd-bertuzzi-has-played/6641/

In this blog entry, Dater discusses at length the Chara/Pacioretty incident and the leaguewide response to it. This entry will provide loads of things to discuss, but first, some ground rules.

Pictured at left is a turnbuckle. It's a buckle (like the one on your belt) that you turn (hence the name) to draw two things closer together... typically ropes or cables. Those familiar with hockey rink construction will note that nowhere within the playing surface is anything like this present, yet the word "turnbuckle" is constantly -- and incorrectly -- being used to describe the thing which Pacioretty hit.

The confusion here is due to the fact that turnbuckles are used in wrestling and boxing rings to pull the ropes taut, covered by a protective padding. This has led many, many people to assume that anything sports-related which is padded to prevent injury can be referred to as a "turnbuckle." The object in question in a hockey rink, however, is correctly referred to as a stanchion, whether it's padded or not.

To be fair, Dater is hardly alone in this mistake and I don't mean to single him out on this one. There are not only plenty of fans, but also players and other hockey 'experts' who have been referring to stanchions as turnbuckles for years, but that doesn't make it any less incorrect. Turnbuckle is a word that describes a specific thing, so let's get it right. The stupidifying of the English language is progressing at an astonishing rate; Newspeak is around the corner. Admirers of the English language, unite! 

Now, on to the blog entry. The basis of this entry is the fact that Air Canada, one of the NHL's larger sponsors, has threatened to pull their sponsorship in light of the devastating injury sustained by Montreal's Max Pacioretty. In this entry, Dater starts by recapping things a bit. He moves on to assert that because Air Canada took no action seven years ago when Todd Bertuzzi broke Steve Moore's neck, that they are being hypocrites now by speaking up against the Chara hit.

I do think it's fair to draw a connection between these two incidents and to question why Air Canada responded one way seven years ago, and a different way today. However, rather than offer a good discussion of this topic, these events, the differing environments in which they took place, and the way the league's response affects peoples' (and corporations') opinions, Dater jumps straight to the sensational "hypocrisy" charge... and that's not fair.

The fact that Air Canada did nothing seven years ago should not bind their hands and prevent them from doing something now. I think it's reasonable to look at these two incidents, rather than as separate and isolated occurrences, as points on a continuum of violence and serious injury in the sport... McSorely/Brashear, Bertuzzi/Moore, and now Chara/Pacioretty... with plenty of lesser ones in between. The fact that all three are not perfectly identical to one another doesn't really matter... from a global perspective, they are all examples of extreme violence in the sport, and as it continues, it's fair to question whether the league has done enough to stop it. Each subsequent occurrence builds on the ones that came before it, making the problem more and more apparent.

The fact that AC did not speak up at any previous point should not prevent them from seeing this incident as their "enough is enough" moment. It doesn't make them hypocrites to speak up about the Chara hit after the previous ten years of violent incidents, any more than it would make a parent a hypocrite to ignore his kid the first three times he burps at the dinner table and then to tell him to stop it the fourth time it happens.

So, why did Air Canada speak up after this incident, and not before? As I said, part of the reason is likely because it's the latest in a string of incidents that have built up, and this was the "last straw," for Air Canada and a lot of others, too. But it also seems logical to assume that because it happened to the Montreal Canadiens, it got more of a response than it might have had it happened elsewhere. Something that happens to the New York Yankees is going to get more attention than something that happens to the Kansas City Royals... it's not hypocrisy, it's just the way the world works.

And of course, there is the fact that the NHL's responses to these incidents were polar opposites... Air Canada and other critics are not necessarily upset with the hit itself, but with how the NHL dealt with it. Certainly, different situations call for different responses, but that is the aspect in which Dater makes his biggest error.

In his attempts to defend his argument from criticism, Dater takes a very bad step when he writes this:

I have heard from a few people saying “Yeah, but Bertuzzi was punished by the NHL over that incident. Chara wasn’t. There’s the difference.” Nobody with a brain is going to compare the Bertuzzi incident with the Chara hit. Those were two TOTALLY DIFFERENT things.


The problem here is that Dater himself has built his entire "hypocrisy" charge based on a comparison of these two incidents, and now he's calling people brainless if they want to follow his lead and compare these two incidents? Can't have it that way, Dater. If he wants to use the things that are similar between Bertuzzi/Moore and Chara/Pacioretty to illustrate his point that AC are being hypocrites, fine... but when it comes time to acknowledge that there are differences between these two situations -- specifically, in the way the league responded to them -- that may explain Air Canada's differing reactions to each, he shuts that down before it can start. Dater basically calls anybody "stupid" who would dare look any further into his example than he wants them to.

The truth is that there are similarities between the two on-ice incidents, and clear-cut differences in how the league responded to them. No, the Bertuzzi incident is not completely concentric with the Chara hit, but it doesn't have to be to be used as a starting point for discussion, as Dater has done. Both injuries were the result of a somewhat typical occurrence during a hockey game (punching a guy in the head, interfering with a guy away from the puck) and they both had a horrible result that nobody can reasonably assume was the premeditated intent of the person who did it. But, the NHL responded quickly and with authority to the Bertuzzi incident, realizing that even though he didn't intend to break anybody's neck, he still did... yet the league did absolutely nothing in the way of punishment to Chara, despite his actions being just as responsible for leading to a broken neck as Bertuzzi's were.

Again, is every detail between these two incidents identical? No, they aren't... but if there's enough similarity there for Dater to hang them up next to each other to accuse somebody of hypocrisy, there's enough similarity between them to question why one incident was met with an indefinite suspension, and the other resulted in no action whatsoever.

Dater won't allow that question, however, and calls you "brainless" if you're going to ask it. I don't have a problem with Dater building a bridge between Bertuzzi/Moore and Chara/Pacioretty to make his point... the problem comes when he then forbids anybody else to use the bridge he just built. THAT's hypocrisy, folks. Dater's as guilty of that here as he thinks Air Canada is.

Dater moves on, thankfully, to discuss the hit itself. He puts most of the blame on the way the arena is built, and uses the similar hit on Ryan Smyth a couple years back (which also went unpunished by the NHL) as support of this. Dater writes,

...No suspension was given to Johnson on that hit, and I can’t find a lot of difference in that hit than the one done by Chara – save for the puck being further away from Pacioretty than it was Smyth, in which case Chara indeed deserved an interference penalty.

I find it funny that in the same breath with which he acknowledges the incredibly important difference between these two hits, he dismissed that difference as practically insignificant. But it isn't... Ryan Smyth had the puck. When you have the puck, you can expect to get hit, because it is legal to hit a guy with the puck. The Smyth hit was a clean hit in an unfortunate part of the rink.

(As an aside, players do realize where they are on the ice. If a player can let up and not board somebody, he can let up and not throw them into the stanchion just as easily. It's a rule I would like to see changed/added).

Chara's hit, however, was not legal, and it was not clean. The puck was thirty feet away from Pacioretty when he was hit... if Dater thinks that's "not a lot of difference," I have to question whether he understands the basics of this game. When you hit a guy illegally, and he is seriously hurt, you should expect consequences.

Another facet which Dater does not acknowledge is the hit to the head. There was no hit to Smyth's head, Johnson got his shoulder into him but did not target the head. As the photo above shows, however, there was most definitely contact to Pacioretty's head. The league supposedly has "cracked down" on blindside hits to the head... but then why does a play that includes a penalty, a hit to the head, AND a broken neck not warrant some sort of suspension? Isn't this exactly the sort of thing the league has been saying they want out of the game?

This is a dangerous, dangerous game. That’s the bottom line. People who think they may be able to legislate all the violence out of the game are on a complete fool’s errand. It’s not going to happen. Unless they just do away with the sport entirely. 

Yes, it is a dangerous game. But, that does not mean that the league should not take steps to keep that danger to a minimum, and the league could definitely have taken some steps in this case. Yes, the construction of the rink itself is a huge factor in this injury, and if there are design changes that can be implemented, the league should look into them. But this was also a dangerous hit because it was an illegal hit, and there's a reason that hits like that are illegal... because the more you hit people like that, the more likely somebody is to get hurt.

The league got this one wrong. Do I want to see Chara suspended for twenty games? Absolutely not... but he should have been suspended for two or three, because his recklessness directly contributed to Pacioretty's injury, and these types of injuries ARE preventable. The league should have sent the message that if you play like that, and somebody gets hurt because of it, there will be a substantial penalty. Canadiens fans would have called two games a slap on the wrist... but Chara didn't even get a slap on the wrist. He got his hair tousled, and Bettman said "Aw shucks, how can I stay mad at you?!" Canadiens fans are, as usual, overreacting to the extreme... but under all that typical nonsense, they do have a point.


I don't really have a problem with Dater's criticism of Air Canada... not that I think they're being hypocrites (they aren't), but I do think that AC is being reactionary here, and could have voiced their concerns in a much different (and more professional) way. I think Dater is dead wrong about the hit, though... Chara should have been disciplined by the NHL, because it was an illegal and dangerous hit. Hits like these can be prevented... there's a rule against boarding, there should be a rule against throwing a guy against a stanchion. Considering the extent of Pacioretty's injury, Chara should have received a suspension, to demonstrate that hits like that are not a part of the game.

Ultimately, the reader is left with the impression that Dater is less interested in the Chara hit than he is about using this as an excuse to bring up the Bertuzzi/Moore incident all over again. Dater's attempt to connect Bertuzzi and Chara, without allowing any dissenting opinions to do the same, just comes across as a juvenile way to present his argument. To start a comparison using those two as examples, base his entire theory on that comparison, and then reject any further discussion based on that same example, is truly hypocritical... and thereby rather ironic in a blog entry dealing with hypocrisy. This important topic deserved a much better discussion than what Dater gives it here.
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Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Article: "Avs' Duchene Aims to Battle Out Of Losing Ways."

http://www.denverpost.com/avalanche/ci_17560603

In this newspaper article, Adrian Dater takes a look at Avalanche center Matt Duchene's struggles of late (Duchene had scored one goal and three assists in the thirteen games after the all-star break).

The article is barely underway before Dater states something completely un-factual:

If the season had ended Monday, the Avs would have chosen fourth in the upcoming draft.
  
This is simply not a true statement; the NHL Entry Draft is not structured in the way that Dater indicates. Rather than strictly picking in reverse order of regular-season finish, the draft includes a lottery system for the first round of picks. Had the season ended Monday, the Avalanche would likely have picked fourth, but they could also have picked either first or fifth. These are the sorts of things that reporters should either know, or research, before writing about.

The article contains a number of good quotes from Duchene, and left me impressed with his attitude during both the team's and his own struggles on the ice. When given an opportunity to bad-mouth his coach a bit, Duchene declines, answering that things like that belong in the locker room. While I don't fault Dater for asking a tough question, I'm pretty happy with the way Duchene chose to answer it. 

Dater then uses a quote from Sacco about player's confidence during this prolonged skid, and establishes that Sacco was indeed referring to Duchene as one of the players he feels lacks confidence right now. It would have been a perfect way to lead into a final question of Duchene and what he thinks of what his coach said, but Dater does not go there. He throws in this Sacco quote, and then kind of just leaves it there unresolved.  

This is not the first time Dater has had something decent going writing-wise, failed to recognize it, and pretty much gobbed it up. He does not seem to recognize the flow present within every well-written piece -- introduction, body, conclusion -- but favors a ransom-note style of composition in which he cuts and pastes sentences together until he has the number of words ordered. I don't know if the fault lies in his ability, his effort, or his editor, but whatever it is, the end result is not good newswriting.

Since it's an article about Duchene and not Sacco, it would have been fitting to allow Duchene to respond to Sacco's comments on his confidence, and it would have made a very satisfying conclusion to this article, but that doesn't happen. Instead, it closes rather awkwardly with a brief quote about the arm injury that sidelined Duchene briefly in February. The subject of his arm injury would have fit much better in the body of the story rather than as the conclusion.


This article features some good quotes about the Avs' current and future star during his first major slump with the team, but the article itself is lacking. Errors reported as fact, and an overall bizarre structure with a decent start, a muddled middle, and a non-existent conclusion, combine to create a rather poorly-done story.


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Monday, March 7, 2011

All Things Avs blog: Dater finds a way to make people still care about Anderson

http://blogs.denverpost.com/avs/2011/03/06/is-craig-anderson-the-avs-best-hope-for-the-no-1-pick/6635/#disqus_thread

Here we have Dater's blog entry about the Avs' position in the upcoming draft. He opens with an "I'm not going to (blank), but..." statement, saying that he won't go into the reasons why he thinks the Anderson trade was a bad one. Naturally, he then immediately spends the remainder of the paragraph rehashing the reasons why he thinks the Anderson trade was a bad one. Enough already.

He moves away from this, though, to discuss what effect Anderson's turnaround in Ottawa might have on the Avalanche. Dater's theory is that if Anderson plays well enough, he could pull the Sens out of last place, making room for the Avs to swoop in and take the #1 pick.

This blog entry is telling for two reasons. One, it shows us that Dater is toeing the line of obsession with the Anderson trade, and Two, it suggests that Dater does not understand how the NHL draft works.

It's a lottery. Every team that doesn't make the playoffs gets thrown in the lottery, weighted by where they finished... the 30th-ranked team has a 25% chance of winning the lottery, the 17th ranked team has a 0.5% chance of winning. The single winning team moves up a maximum of four places from their finishing spot, and every other team falls in line based on where they finished. This means that the bottom five teams all have a chance at the #1 pick, and the team which finishes 30th will draft either first or second no matter what.

However, Dater writes sentences like this one:

That leaves Ottawa maybe only standing in the way of that No. 1 pick, and Anderson’s red-hot goaltending since the trade (though he lost his last start) could make the difference in dropping Colorado to No. 30.

which sure sounds like he's under the impression that the 30th place team automatically gets the #1 pick. Well, they don't. Because only the next four teams can leapfrog over the 30th ranked team for the first pick, the 30th place team has a slightly less than 50% chance of that first pick despite only having a 25% chance of winning the lottery. And because there's only a single winner which could move up spots, the last-place team is guaranteed the 2nd pick at worst, at just over 50% odds. So it's basically a coin flip for that last-place team, with the odds slightly in favor of the 2nd pick over the 1st.

There are two possibilities here: either Dater does not understand the draft but writes about it anyway, or he DOES understand the draft but just doesn't care enough to be accurate when he writes. Either one is unforgivable for a journalist. Take the time to know the facts and to present them accurately, AD.

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